wok rev 2351

slitaz-eeepc: Tidy up docs
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Wed Mar 04 19:53:35 2009 +0000 (2009-03-04)
parents 096d75757ea0
children f4a8698969b0
files slitaz-eeepc/receipt slitaz-eeepc/stuff/eeepc.html slitaz-eeepc/stuff/tazeee
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     1.1 --- a/slitaz-eeepc/receipt	Wed Mar 04 16:34:19 2009 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/slitaz-eeepc/receipt	Wed Mar 04 19:53:35 2009 +0000
     1.3 @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     1.4  PACKAGE="slitaz-eeepc"
     1.5  VERSION="1.0"
     1.6  CATEGORY="system-tools"
     1.7 -SHORT_DESC="SliTaz EeePC scripts and configurations files."
     1.8 +SHORT_DESC="SliTaz EeePC scripts and configuration files."
     1.9  DEPENDS="915resolution dmidecode atl2 atl1e rt2860sta"
    1.10  MAINTAINER="pankso@slitaz.org"
    1.11  WEB_SITE="http://www.slitaz.org/"
     2.1 --- a/slitaz-eeepc/stuff/eeepc.html	Wed Mar 04 16:34:19 2009 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/slitaz-eeepc/stuff/eeepc.html	Wed Mar 04 19:53:35 2009 +0000
     2.3 @@ -32,49 +32,49 @@
     2.4  
     2.5  <h3>About</h3>
     2.6  <p>
     2.7 -Welcome to SliTaz EeePC flavor. This Live system can be used from a
     2.8 -cdrom on a standard desktop to create a Live USB system. On the EeePC
     2.9 -you can boot from a USB key or a SD card, just press <code>Esc</code>
    2.10 -when power on to select the wanted device. SliTaz EeePC flavor provide
    2.11 -the tools and drivers used on some EeePC: 701, 901, 1000.
    2.12 +Welcome to the SliTaz EeePC flavor. This can be used from a
    2.13 +cdrom on a standard desktop to create a LiveUSB system. On the EeePC
    2.14 +you can easily boot from a USB key or a SD card - just press <code>Esc</code>
    2.15 +when powered on to select the wanted device. The SliTaz EeePC flavor provides
    2.16 +the tools and drivers used on the EeePC: 701, 901 and 1000.
    2.17  </p>
    2.18  
    2.19  <h3>Live USB media</h3>
    2.20  <p>
    2.21 -To use this system on the EeePC you need to creat a Live USB media, the
    2.22 -simplest option to generate such media is to boot the LiveCD on a standard
    2.23 +To use this system on the EeePC, you need to create a LiveUSB device, the
    2.24 +simplest option to generate one is to boot the LiveCD on a standard
    2.25  desktop and then run: System Tools &rarr; LiveUSB Tool. If you already run
    2.26 -SliTaz from the core LiveCD or an installed system, you can generate the
    2.27 -Live media using directly the ISO image. If you want to creat the media
    2.28 -with the command line, please read the Handbook or TazUSB manual.
    2.29 +SliTaz from a core LiveCD or an installed system, you can generate the
    2.30 +LiveUSB media directly using the ISO image. If you want to create the media
    2.31 +using the command line, please read the Handbook or TazUSB manual.
    2.32  </p>
    2.33  
    2.34  <h3>Networking</h3>
    2.35  <p>
    2.36 -When booting the Live system on EeePC the Wireless nerwork interface is
    2.37 -enable by default if the driver is installed. To manage Wireless network
    2.38 -connection you can use Wifibox from the menu: System Tools &rarr; Wireless
    2.39 -networks connections. To use the Ethernet cable connection you can use Netbox
    2.40 +When booting the Live system on an EeePC, the Wireless network interface is
    2.41 +enabled by default if the driver is installed. To manage Wireless network
    2.42 +connections you can use Wifibox from the menu: System Tools &rarr; Wireless
    2.43 +networks connections. To use an Ethernet cable connection you can use Netbox
    2.44  from the menu and start the DHCP client.
    2.45  </p>
    2.46  
    2.47  <h3>Package slitaz-eeepc</h3>
    2.48  <p>
    2.49 -The package slitaz-eeepc provide the small tool named <code>tazee</code>,
    2.50 -and the boot script to configure EeePC. The configuration is stored in
    2.51 -the file <code>/etc/eeepc.conf</code>, to see current configuration you
    2.52 +The package slitaz-eeepc provides a small tool named <code>tazee</code>,
    2.53 +and a boot script to configure an EeePC. The configuration is stored in
    2.54 +the <code>/etc/eeepc.conf</code> file. To read the current configuration you
    2.55  can open it in a text editor, use SliTaz EeePC Box from the menu or use
    2.56  the command: <code>tazeee show-config</code>.
    2.57  </p>
    2.58  
    2.59  <h3>Installation</h3>
    2.60  <ul>
    2.61 -	<li>Boot from a LiveUSB media</li>
    2.62 -	<li>Start the installer with the dedicated button in Slitaz EeePC Box
    2.63 +	<li>Boot from LiveUSB media.</li>
    2.64 +	<li>Start the installer with the dedicated button in the Slitaz EeePC Box
    2.65  	or use this command from a terminal: <code>su -c 'tazeee install'</code>.
    2.66  	To use the first SSD disk: format /dev/hdc1 (on 901), install GRUB
    2.67  	and then exit the installer to let tazeee finish the configuration.</li>
    2.68 -	<li>Reboot and enjoy</li>
    2.69 +	<li>Reboot and enjoy.</li>
    2.70  </ul>
    2.71  
    2.72  <!-- End content -->
     3.1 --- a/slitaz-eeepc/stuff/tazeee	Wed Mar 04 16:34:19 2009 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/slitaz-eeepc/stuff/tazeee	Wed Mar 04 19:53:35 2009 +0000
     3.3 @@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
     3.4  		# EeePC havn't got a cdrom so we must fake it.
     3.5  		echo ""
     3.6  		echo "Starting SliTaz EeePC installation..."
     3.7 -		echo "Please do not reboot trought the installer, just exit."
     3.8 +		echo "Please do not reboot through the installer, just exit."
     3.9  		sleep 4
    3.10  		rmdir /media/cdrom
    3.11  		ln -s /home /media/cdrom