tazusb rev 31 1.2.2

Fix typos and make comments consistent
author Mike D. Smith <MikeDSmith25@gmail.com>
date Sat Jul 19 05:15:14 2008 +0000 (2008-07-19)
parents 0f0a9320e571
children 42dc7ff2a6f8
files README tazusb
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     1.1 --- a/README	Wed Jun 25 15:59:58 2008 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/README	Sat Jul 19 05:15:14 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
     1.4  ===============================================================================
     1.5  
     1.6  
     1.7 -SliTaz LveUSB utility aka TazUSB. Please read the manual for more informations.
     1.8 +SliTaz LiveUSB utility aka TazUSB. Please read the manual for more information.
     1.9  
    1.10  
    1.11  ===============================================================================
     2.1 --- a/tazusb	Wed Jun 25 15:59:58 2008 +0200
     2.2 +++ b/tazusb	Sat Jul 19 05:15:14 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
     2.4  # ext/syslinux install
     2.5  install_boot()
     2.6  {
     2.7 -	#decide if we're installing syslinux or extlinux
     2.8 +	# Decide if we're installing syslinux or extlinux
     2.9  	if [ "$FSTYPE" = "vfat" ]; then
    2.10  		ST=syslinux
    2.11  		STC="syslinux -d /boot/syslinux/ $DEVICE"
    2.12 @@ -226,7 +226,7 @@
    2.13  	cp /media/cdrom/boot/isolinux/isolinux.cfg $TARGET_ROOT/boot/$ST/$ST.$STE
    2.14  	sed -i -e "s/isolinux.msg/$ST.msg/"	 $TARGET_ROOT/boot/$ST/$ST.$STE
    2.15  	
    2.16 -	# Add home= to apppend in extlinux or syslinux.cfg
    2.17 +	# Add home= to append in extlinux or syslinux.cfg
    2.18  	sed -i -e "s/\(append.*\)/\1 home=$UUID/" $TARGET_ROOT/boot/$ST/$ST.$STE
    2.19  	
    2.20  	# Splash screen and help files.
    2.21 @@ -245,7 +245,7 @@
    2.22  		sed -i s/isolinux.msg/$ST.msg/ $cfg
    2.23  	done
    2.24  
    2.25 -	# Modifing include file if exist.
    2.26 +	# Modifing include file if exists.
    2.27  	if [ -f $TARGET_ROOT/boot/$ST/common.inc ]; then
    2.28  		sed -i -e "s/isolinux.msg/$ST.msg/" $TARGET_ROOT/boot/$ST/common.inc
    2.29  	fi
    2.30 @@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
    2.31  }
    2.32  
    2.33  # Generate a virtual swap file in /home/swap. SliTaz boot script 
    2.34 -# will active it, usefull for low memory system
    2.35 +# will active it, useful for low memory system
    2.36  gen_swap_file()
    2.37  {
    2.38  	echo ""
    2.39 @@ -325,7 +325,7 @@
    2.40  	echo -en "\033[1mClean\033[0m
    2.41  ===============================================================================
    2.42  Remove old rootfs.gz.unixtimestamp backup filesystems to free up disk space.\n\n"
    2.43 -	# locate and interactively remove old filesystems from /home directory
    2.44 +	# Locate and interactively remove old filesystems from /home directory
    2.45  	for file in `find /home/boot/rootfs.gz.[0-9]*`
    2.46  	do
    2.47  		echo -n "Do you wish to remove: `basename $file` (Yes/no/exit) ? "
    2.48 @@ -347,14 +347,14 @@
    2.49  
    2.50  case $COMMAND in
    2.51  	writefs)
    2.52 -		#writefs to rootfs.gz
    2.53 +		# Writefs to rootfs.gz
    2.54  		check_root
    2.55  		if [ -z $2 ]; then
    2.56  			COMPRESSION=none
    2.57  		else
    2.58  			COMPRESSION=$2
    2.59  		fi
    2.60 -		#start info
    2.61 +		# Start info
    2.62  		echo ""
    2.63  		echo -e "\033[1mWrite filesystem\033[0m
    2.64  ===============================================================================
    2.65 @@ -364,10 +364,10 @@
    2.66  Archive compression: $COMPRESSION"
    2.67  		echo ""
    2.68  		
    2.69 -		#clear out tazpkg cache
    2.70 +		# Clear out tazpkg cache
    2.71  		rm /var/cache/tazpkg/* -r -f
    2.72  
    2.73 -		#optionally remove sound card selection
    2.74 +		# Optionally remove sound card selection
    2.75  		echo -n "Do you wish to remove the sound card selection (Yes/no/exit) ? "
    2.76  		read anser
    2.77  		case $anser in
    2.78 @@ -385,7 +385,7 @@
    2.79  		esac
    2.80  		status
    2.81  		
    2.82 -		#create list of files
    2.83 +		# Create list of files
    2.84  		find /bin /etc /init /sbin /var /dev /lib /root /usr >/tmp/list
    2.85  
    2.86  		for dir in /home /proc /sys /tmp /mnt /media /media/cdrom /media/flash /media/usbdisk
    2.87 @@ -393,7 +393,7 @@
    2.88  			echo $dir >>/tmp/list
    2.89  		done
    2.90  
    2.91 -		#gen initramfs with specified compression
    2.92 +		# Generate initramfs with specified compression
    2.93  		if [ "$COMPRESSION" = "lzma" ]; then
    2.94  			echo -n "Creating rootfs.gz with lzma compression... "
    2.95  			cat /tmp/list | cpio -o -H newc | lzma e -si -so > /rootfs.gz
    2.96 @@ -407,15 +407,14 @@
    2.97  			cat /tmp/list | cpio -o -H newc > /rootfs.gz
    2.98  		fi
    2.99  
   2.100 -		#get initramfs size
   2.101 +		# Get initramfs size
   2.102  		size=`du -sh /rootfs.gz | cut -f 1`
   2.103  
   2.104 -		#if the bootable medium is where it should be, copy across
   2.105 -
   2.106 +		# If the bootable medium is where it should be, copy across
   2.107  		if (test -e /home/boot/bzImage); then
   2.108  			echo "Moving rootfs.gz to media. Remember to unmount for delayed writes!"
   2.109  
   2.110 -			#move the old filesystem with the unix timestamp for reference
   2.111 +			# Move the old filesystem with the unix timestamp for reference
   2.112  			if (test -e /home/boot/previous.gz); then
   2.113  				mv /home/boot/previous.gz /home/boot/rootfs.gz.$(date +%s)
   2.114  			fi