# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1219180917 0
# Node ID cbc3753477f5b38f10e0984fef361ecdf084ac97
# Parent  5dae13b0abcbd8412b6010a0d26d6a966bfb7e1e
en: Tidy Manuals and typos

diff -r 5dae13b0abcb -r cbc3753477f5 en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html	Sat Aug 16 13:07:06 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html	Tue Aug 19 21:21:57 2008 +0000
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@
 <h3><font color="#6c0023">Turn off the system or restart</font></h3>
 <p>
 To stop or restart SliTaz, you can use the <code>halt</code> or <code>reboot</code>
-commands or the &lt;Ctrl+Alt+Delete&gt; key combination, which enables a
+commands or the &lt;Ctrl+Alt+Delete&gt; key combination which enables a
 system reboot. In case of any problems you can use the <code>-f</code>
 option signifing <em>forced</em>:
 </p>
diff -r 5dae13b0abcb -r cbc3753477f5 en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Sat Aug 16 13:07:06 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Tue Aug 19 21:21:57 2008 +0000
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 <h3>To begin</h3>
 <p>
 Creating your own LiveCD version of SliTaz with Tazlito 
-takes little time and you can choose precisely the software
+takes very little time and you can choose precisely the software
 packages that you want to find on the system. The support
 of flavors permits you to generate a customized LiveCD
 amended by a list of packages or flavors created by the SliTaz
@@ -187,11 +187,11 @@
 <h3>Create a flavor</h3>
 <p>
 Tazlito allows you to easily create your own flavor from
-the results of manufacturing the distribution (<code>gen-distro</code>).
+the results of generating the distribution (<code>gen-distro</code>).
 The file will contain all the flavor's additional files,
 a description and a list of packages which can be reused later
 and updated according to the versions of packages. To generate
-you own flavor responding to one or two questions:
+your own flavor responding to one or two questions:
 </p>
 <pre>
  # tazlito gen-flavor new-flavor
diff -r 5dae13b0abcb -r cbc3753477f5 en/doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html
--- a/en/doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html	Sat Aug 16 13:07:06 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html	Tue Aug 19 21:21:57 2008 +0000
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 <h3><font color="#6c0023">usage</font></h3>
 <p>
 The 'usage' command displays a summary of available commands
-with short descriptions:
+with a short description:
 </p>
 <pre>
  # tazlito usage
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 The 'gen-config' command allows you to generate a configuration
 file ready to be edited. By default the file is created in
 the current directory, but can also be in another directory
-if specified:
+if specified via the command line:
 </p>
 <pre>
  # tazlito gen-config
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
 The 'extract-distro' command is used to extract an ISO image
 from the LiveCD to rebuild the structure of the root cdrom
 and system. It is then possible to make the desired changes
-or additions and rebuild the ISO image via 'gen-iso' and 
+or additions and rebuild the ISO image via 'gen-iso' or 
 'gen-initiso'. Example of use:
 </p>
 <pre>
diff -r 5dae13b0abcb -r cbc3753477f5 en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html
--- a/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Sat Aug 16 13:07:06 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Tue Aug 19 21:21:57 2008 +0000
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 <p>
 Description of the package (if it exists). This command
 displays the 'description.txt' file of each package (a simple
-text file, no wider than 80 characters to fit in a standard terminal):
+text file, justified to 80 characters to fit in a standard terminal):
 </p>
 <pre>
  # tazpkg desc busybox
@@ -156,8 +156,8 @@
 This command allows the installation of a local package with
 the .tazpkg extension. See 'get-install' to install a 
 package from the internet. Note that you can force the
-installation via the --forced, uninstall and reinstall options.
-You can also specify the root system where you want to install the
+installation via the --forced, uninstall and reinstall options 
+or specify the root system where you want to install the
 packages via the -root= option:
 </p>
 <pre>
diff -r 5dae13b0abcb -r cbc3753477f5 en/get/index.html
--- a/en/get/index.html	Sat Aug 16 13:07:06 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/get/index.html	Tue Aug 19 21:21:57 2008 +0000
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
 <a name="cooking"></a>
 <h2>LiveCD - Cooking version</h2>
 <p>
-SliTaz "Cooking" LiveCD is a constantly evolving version. It is fully usable, allows
+SliTaz "Cooking" LiveCD is a constantly evolving version, fully usable, it allows
 you to test the latest improvements and packages, ask for new features or report
 bugs to help us to prepare for the stable version.
 </p>