# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1221247083 0
# Node ID 914f54a60868f7feaa3f43e84237c5a7f055631f
# Parent  89e42e81757a801ce7773c91ca677ac70e114a91
en: Edit manuals and docs

diff -r 89e42e81757a -r 914f54a60868 en/doc/index.html
--- a/en/doc/index.html	Thu Sep 11 17:14:41 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/index.html	Fri Sep 12 19:18:03 2008 +0000
@@ -79,11 +79,12 @@
 	package management, network or system administration
 	and specific instructions. This book is a community effort to provide
 	high quality documentation for SliTaz users. It will help you get started
-	with SliTaz GNU/Linux and show you how to configure the system to your
+	with SliTaz GNU/Linux and show you how to configure the system to your own
 	needs and preferences.</li>
 	<li><a href="cookbook/">Cookbook</a> - SliTaz Cookbook. Information regarding the 
 	management, operation and development of the distribution. Instructions on how 
-	to use the wok and package receipts, tools, descriptions of boot scripts and rootcd files.</li>
+	to use the wok and package receipts, descriptions of boot scripts and rootcd files,
+	and various tools.</li>
 </ul>
 	
 <h2><font color="#df8f06">Manuals</font></h2>	
diff -r 89e42e81757a -r 914f54a60868 en/doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html
--- a/en/doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html	Thu Sep 11 17:14:41 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html	Fri Sep 12 19:18:03 2008 +0000
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 Tazlito can also generate a distribution from a list of packages 
 previously downloaded. To run, Tazlito uses the configuration file 
 /etc/slitaz-tools/tazlito.conf or a tazlito.conf found in the 
-current directory that can be easily generated 
+current directory that can be generated 
 by Tazlito. It specifies the name of the ISO, volume, maintainer and 
 the paths of the packages to distribute and the generated ISO. 
 Tazlito can also set up a directory containing additional files, 
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@
 <p>
 The 'gen-config' command allows you to generate a configuration
 file ready to be edited. By default the file is created in
-the current directory, but can also be in another directory
-if specified via the command line:
+the current directory, but can be in another directory
+if specified on the command line:
 </p>
 <pre>
  # tazlito gen-config
diff -r 89e42e81757a -r 914f54a60868 en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html
--- a/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Thu Sep 11 17:14:41 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Fri Sep 12 19:18:03 2008 +0000
@@ -224,8 +224,8 @@
 of installable packages on the mirror and before starting 
 will save the old list. Once the list is updated
 you can then use the 'list' and 'search' commands. To view
-and list the differences, you can use 'list-mirror --diff' and to view 
-and update packages, you can 'upgrade'. To recharge the
+and list the differences, you can use 'list-mirror --diff', and to view 
+and update packages, you can simply 'upgrade'. To recharge the
 latest list of packages:
 </p>
 <pre>
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
 The 'block' and 'unblock' commands permit you to block
 installed package versions so that they are not maintained
 by an 'upgrade'. The list of packages on hold are contained
-in the /var/lib/tazpkg/blocked-packages.list, this file can also
+in the /var/lib/tazpkg/blocked-packages.list. This file can also
 be edited by hand. To block or unblock a package such as
 Grub:
 </p>
@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@
 <h3><font color="#6c0023">setup-mirror</font></h3>
 <p>
 Setup the URL for the mirror. The 'setup-mirror' command
-will ask for the URL for the new mirror. You can specify
+will ask for the URL of the new mirror. You can specify
 multiple URLs separated by spaces. Note that you can also
 modify the main /var/lib/tazpkg/mirror file. The URL must
 point to the directory containing the 'packages.list' and