# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1242776875 0
# Node ID 7c8698c9a6d432b7a28787e19dd697c0592d82d6
# Parent  30e3cf297bc48dbd8f4faa58d308ddeeaf2294ed
en: Tidy up latest news

diff -r 30e3cf297bc4 -r 7c8698c9a6d4 en/index.html
--- a/en/index.html	Tue May 19 23:43:04 2009 +0200
+++ b/en/index.html	Tue May 19 23:47:55 2009 +0000
@@ -137,22 +137,22 @@
 	
 	<li><strong>19 May 2009 - SliTaz at LinuxDays 2009 (Geneva)</strong>
 	<p>
-	During the LinuxDays show in Switzerland, the association will hold a
+	During the LinuxDays show in Switzerland, the association will have a
 	booth in the Association Village and a lecture will be given on Wednesday
-	morning. The lecture is a case study based on a corporate view using a 
+	morning. The lecture is a case study with a corporate view based on using a 
 	"SliTaz Business Server" with a switchboard, integrated ERP, mail, LDAP,
 	etc...
 	</p>
 	<p>
 	During the 3 days, the exhibition stand will be manned by members
-	of the SliTaz project. The booth will offer demonstrations including the
-	creation of bootable USB keys (LiveUSB) and cdroms. The flavor of the 
-	LinuxDays LiveCD will contain a selection of software designed for mobile 
+	of the SliTaz project. The booth will offer demonstrations, including the
+	creation of bootable USB keys (LiveUSB) and cdroms. The LinuxDays LiveCD 
+	will contain a selection of software designed for mobile 
 	use. The exhibition lounge will also have a forum and we will gladly answer 
-	any questions. So feel free to visit us! Information can be found on the
-	exhibition website and 
-	<a href="http://labs.slitaz.org/wiki/events/2009-linuxdays">SliTaz Labs</a>.
-	LinuxDays website: <a href="http://2009.linuxdays.ch/">2009.linuxdays.ch</a>
+	any questions. So feel free to visit us! Information can be found on 
+	<a href="http://labs.slitaz.org/wiki/events/2009-linuxdays">SliTaz Labs</a>
+	and the <a href="http://2009.linuxdays.ch/">2009.linuxdays.ch</a> website.
+	
 	</p></li>
 	
 	<li><strong>16 April 2009 - SliTaz GNU/Linux 2.0 release</strong>
diff -r 30e3cf297bc4 -r 7c8698c9a6d4 en/rss.xml
--- a/en/rss.xml	Tue May 19 23:43:04 2009 +0200
+++ b/en/rss.xml	Tue May 19 23:47:55 2009 +0000
@@ -23,18 +23,19 @@
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 		<pubDate>Thu, 19 May 2009 22:30:00 GMT</pubDate>
 		<description>
-	During the LinuxDays show in Switzerland, the association will hold a
-	booth in the Association Village and a lecture will be given on Wednesday
-	morning. The lecture is a case study based on a corporate view using a 
-	"SliTaz Business Server" with a switchboard, integrated ERP, mail, LDAP,
-	etc... During the 3 days, the exhibition stand will be manned by members
-	of the SliTaz project. The booth will offer demonstrations including the
-	creation of bootable USB keys (LiveUSB) and cdroms. The flavor of the 
-	LinuxDays LiveCD will contain a selection of software designed for mobile 
-	use. The exhibition lounge will also have a forum and we will gladly answer 
-	any questions. So feel free to visit us! Information can be found on the
-	exhibition website and SliTaz Labs: http://labs.slitaz.org/wiki/events/2009-linuxdays"
-	LinuxDays website: http://2009.linuxdays.ch/
+	During the LinuxDays show in Switzerland, the association will have 
+	a booth in the Association Village and a lecture will be given on 
+	Wednesday morning. The lecture is a case study with a corporate view 
+	based on using a "SliTaz Business Server" with a switchboard,
+	integrated ERP, mail, LDAP, etc... During the 3 days, the exhibition 
+	stand will be manned by members of the SliTaz project. The booth will 
+	offer demonstrations, including the creation of bootable USB keys 
+	(LiveUSB) and cdroms. The LinuxDays LiveCD will contain a selection 
+	of software designed for mobile use. The exhibition lounge will also 
+	have a forum and we will gladly answer any questions. So feel free 
+	to visit us! Information can be found on SliTaz Labs: 
+	http://labs.slitaz.org/wiki/events/2009-linuxdays and the exhibition 
+	website: http://2009.linuxdays.ch/
 		</description>
 	</item>