# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1294435326 0
# Node ID 70e92ef609c0320ab9dde2550233e28e29ca5784
# Parent  f0add8cc86704e1a68dcd0b71ac8a014d7e37027
Tiny edits

diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/about/index.html
--- a/en/about/index.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/about/index.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 	<div id="block_top">
 	<h1>About us</h1>
 	<p>
-		Small, fast, stable and easy to use! That all about SliTaz goals.
+		Small, fast, stable and easy to use! That's all about SliTaz goals.
 	</p>
 	<ul>
 		<li><a href="#intro">Introduction</a></li>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/artwork/index.html
--- a/en/artwork/index.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/artwork/index.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@
 	<div id="block_top">
 		<h1>Artwork</h1>
 		<p>
-			Find, enjoy, comment and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 
-			<a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/image">Community Network</a>. You
+			Find, enjoy, and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 
+			<a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/image">Community Network</a>. Your
 			work may be used on a Cooking release.
 		</p>
 		<ul>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/artwork/screenshots.html
--- a/en/artwork/screenshots.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/artwork/screenshots.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
 		<p>
 			Pictures say more than a thousand words... Screenshots of 
 			the latest Stable and Cooking versions.	You may also want to
-			find, comment and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 
+			find, comment on, and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 
 			<a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/image">Community Network</a>.
 		</p>
 	<!-- Top block end -->
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/doc/index.html
--- a/en/doc/index.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/doc/index.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -68,10 +68,10 @@
 	<div id="block_top">
 	<h1>English documentation</h1>
 	<p>
-		Most of SliTaz documentation is avalaible on the community Wiki
+		Most of the SliTaz documentation is available on the community Wiki
 		site. Manuals and a getting started guide is provided by each
-		SliTaz LiveCD, installed in <code>/usr/share/doc/slitaz</code>
-		and also available through the "Documentation" menu.
+		SliTaz LiveCD (installed in <code>/usr/share/doc/slitaz</code>
+		and also available through the "Documentation" menu).
 	</p>
 	<ul>
 		<li><a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:start">Community Wiki</a></li>
@@ -103,10 +103,10 @@
 
 <h2>Scratchbook</h2>
 <p>
-	Historicaly the Scratchbook was written when SliTaz was created and wasn't
-	made to be updated. By the time some SliTaz fellows migrated the book the
-	Wiki and have made some update:
-	<a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:scratchbook:start">Comunity Scratchbook</a>
+	Historically, the Scratchbook was written when SliTaz was created and wasn't
+	made to be updated. But over time, some SliTaz contributors migrated the book 
+	over to the Wiki and have made some updates:
+	<a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:scratchbook:start">Community Scratchbook</a>
 </p>
 <p>
 	SliTaz <a href="scratchbook/index.html">Original Scratchbook</a> -
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/get/index.html
--- a/en/get/index.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/get/index.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
 	<div id="block_top">
 	<h1>Get SliTaz</h1>
 	<p>
-		Download the latest stable version for production purpose or
+		Download the latest stable version for production purposes or
 		a solid desktop environment. Use the Cooking version to test
 		and help us improve the distribution.
 	</p>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/index.php
--- a/en/index.php	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/index.php	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -72,8 +72,8 @@
 		<h1>Main page</h1>
 		<p>
 			SliTaz is a free operating system, working completely in RAM and
-			booting from removable media such as a cdrom or USB key and can
-			also. SliTaz is distributed as a LiveCD and weighs less than 30MB.
+			booting from removable media such as a cdrom or USB key. SliTaz 
+			is distributed as a LiveCD and weighs less than 30MB.
 			The system is fast, stable and easy to use. SliTaz is intuitive,
 			providing a lightweight, elegant desktop, detailed documentation
 			and easy to use configuration tools. <a href="about/">More information...</a>
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 	<a href="http://labs.slitaz.org/">laboratories</a>. Both are
 	available as a <a href="rss.xml">XML feed</a>. The project also
 	publishes a small monthly Newsletter. The website <a href="../">main page</a>
-	will give you a nice overview of latest news, cooked packages, commits
+	will give you a nice overview of the latest news, commits, cooked packages, 
 	and Tweets.
 </p>
 
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/mailing-list.html
--- a/en/mailing-list.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/mailing-list.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -92,9 +92,8 @@
 	<div id="block_top">
 	<h1>Mailing list</h1>
 	<p>
-		Support, developpement, SliTaz contributors discusions and 
-		announcement. All this is part of the mailing list - Join now
-		to get help or involved into the project.
+		SliTaz contributors discussions and announcements, support, development. 
+		All this is part of the mailing list - Join now to get help or involved in the project.
 	</p>
 	<ul>
 		<li><a href="mailing-list.html#about">About the list</a> - 
@@ -217,6 +216,7 @@
 		<li><a href="../netmap.php">Network Map</a></li>
 		<li>Page modified the 06 Jan 2011</li>
 		<li><a href="http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=referer"><img
+
 		src="../pics/website/xhtml10.png" alt="Valid XHTML 1.0"
 		title="Code validé XHTML 1.0"
 		style="width: 80px; height: 15px; vertical-align: middle;" /></a></li>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/news/2007.html
--- a/en/news/2007.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/news/2007.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 	<h1>News archives</h1>
 	<p>
 		Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken
-		due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its
+		due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their
 		own domain).
 	</p>
 	<h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/news/2008.html
--- a/en/news/2008.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/news/2008.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
 	<h1>News archives</h1>
 	<p>
 		Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken
-		due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its
+		due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their
 		own domain).
 	</p>
 	<h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/news/2009.html
--- a/en/news/2009.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/news/2009.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 	<h1>News archives</h1>
 	<p>
 		Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken
-		due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its
+		due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their
 		own domain).
 	</p>
 	<h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/news/index.html
--- a/en/news/index.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/news/index.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 	<h1>News archives</h1>
 	<p>
 		Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken
-		due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its
+		due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their
 		own domain).
 	</p>
 	<h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/packages/index.html
--- a/en/packages/index.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/packages/index.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -126,8 +126,8 @@
 
 <h2>Documentation</h2>
 <p>
-The SliTaz project provide a large <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/">documentation</a>
-to let you learn install and manage packages on your SliTaz GNU/Linux distribution.
+The SliTaz project provides detailed <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/">documentation</a>
+to let you learn how to install and manage packages on your SliTaz GNU/Linux distribution.
 The <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">support forum</a> members will help you
 in case of trouble and is also the place to request a new package.
 </p>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 en/template.html
--- a/en/template.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/en/template.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
 	<div id="block_top">
 	<h1>Template</h1>
 	<p>
-		Page introduction and/or table of content
+		Page introduction and/or table of contents
 	</p>
 	<!-- Top block end -->
 	</div>
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 i18n.html
--- a/i18n.html	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/i18n.html	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -53,14 +53,14 @@
 		<p>
 			The main goal of SliTaz is to provide full support for a given
 			language, including the website, official Wiki documentation,
-			a dedicated forum and all SliTaz related project such as the
+			a dedicated forum and all SliTaz related projects such as the
 			LiveCD GUI builder.
 		</p>
 		<p>
-			Traduction is a community effort and everyone can help. You
+			Translation is a community effort and everyone can help. You're
 			welcome to join the team! You can find more pot files on 
-			<a href="http://hg.slitaz.org/">Hg</a>, just pick up one,
-			translate it and sent it to the mailing list or upload it to
+			<a href="http://hg.slitaz.org/">Hg</a>, just pick one up,
+			translate it and send it to the mailing list or upload it onto the
 			SliTaz Community Network aka <a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/">SCN</a>.
 		</p>
 	<!-- Top block end -->
diff -r f0add8cc8670 -r 70e92ef609c0 index.php
--- a/index.php	Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100
+++ b/index.php	Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
 <h2>About SliTaz</h2>
 <p>
 SliTaz is an open source and free operating system providing a fully featured
-desktop or server in less than 30 Mb. SliTaz is simple to use, fast and stable.
+desktop or server in less than 30 MB. SliTaz is simple to use, fast and stable.
 We have an active community and <a href="netmap.php">network</a> to provide 
 help and get involved.
 </p>