# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1221140894 0
# Node ID 658f2885e2f246a1d672a8011bdaa68759b8e023
# Parent  983368e8f0aa21eaf607cf33ab6cb663462d8ec0
en: General Tidyup

diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/development.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
  $ geany &amp;
 </pre>
 <p>
-Note: when compiling the source code, the <code>./configure</code> script offers the option: 
+Note when compiling the source code, the <code>./configure</code> script offers the option: 
 <code>-enable-the-force</code>... Which you can use if you ever feel the need to become a
 Jedi Knight!
 </p>
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
 The purpose of this script is to display <em>Hello World</em>. You can start
 by creating the file and then making it executable on the command line and then editing with IDE Geany. 
 Note the script is called <code>hello.pl</code>, but you can name it as you see
-fit with or without the <code>.pl</code> extension:
+fit, with or without the <code>.pl</code> extension:
 </p>
 <pre>
  $ touch hello.pl
diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/graphics.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 <p>
 GQview is very light and quick and allows you to navigate rapidly between images by selecting files
 in a directory tree with a single mouse click. It supports slideshows, image rotation, adding
-keywords and tags, drag and drop and can display EXIF data. It also allows you to edit images
+keywords and tags, drag and drop, and can display EXIF data. It also allows you to edit images
 in the software of your choice (Mtpaint, GIMP for example). To install GQview:
 </p>
 <pre> # tazpkg get-install gqview
diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/install.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/install.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/install.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
 </pre>
 <p>
 That's all, SliTaz is installed. Before rebooting on your new SliTaz GNU/Linux
-installation please check that you have a bootloader (GRUB or Lilo) and add 
+installation, please check that you have a bootloader (GRUB or Lilo) and add 
 the necessary lines to boot SliTaz.
 </p>
 
diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
 <p>
 Xine is a multimedia project providing various video viewers and audio players. SliTaz provides libraries 
 and a media player contained in the package <code>xine-ui</code>. Xine uses a Xlib interface, a control 
-panel, a right click configuration menu and various plugins. It can play ogg, mp3 and flac audio codecs 
+panel, a right click configuration menu and various plugins. It can play ogg, mp3 and flac audio codecs, 
 and mov, avi or mpg video formats. To install xine and its dependancies:
 </p>
 <pre>
diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/network.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/network.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/network.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 <pre> # tazpkg get-install links
 </pre>
 <p>
-Links offers a graphical and a text mode. To use the graphical mode, we can use the option <code>-g</code>.
+Links offers a graphical and a text mode. To use the graphical mode, we can use the option <code>-g</code>:
 </p>
 <pre> $ links -g &amp;
  $ links -g <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en">http://www.slitaz.org/en</a> &amp;
diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/packages.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/packages.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/packages.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 <p>
 Tazpkg lets you list all installed packages, installed 
 packages by category or it can display the list of available packages on the mirror.
-To display a single list of all installed packages on the system just type:
+To display a single list of all installed packages on the system, just type:
 </p>
 <pre>
  $ tazpkg list
diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
  # tazkmap
 </pre>
 <p>
-To check all available locales or your current configuration you can use the
+To check all available locales or your current configuration, you can use the
 command <code>locale</code> as a single user or root (C for English):
 </p>
 <pre>
diff -r 983368e8f0aa -r 658f2885e2f2 en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Wed Sep 10 03:53:27 2008 -0300
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Thu Sep 11 13:48:14 2008 +0000
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
 <h4>Support FAT and NTFS filesystems</h4>
 <p>
 To have the support of FAT16 or Windows FAT32 filesystems, you must install the package 
-<code>dosfstools</code>. To enable read/write support for NTFS partitions, you need to install: <code>fuse</code>, 
+<code>dosfstools</code>. To enable read/write support for NTFS partitions, you need: <code>fuse</code>, 
 <code>ntfs-3g</code> and <code>ntfsprogs</code>.
 </p>