# HG changeset patch # User Paul Issott # Date 1220956614 0 # Node ID 442ece8703ddd1ef4769e1fd26a6214c5d6725ab # Parent 1aee368acd7c587ae6a8232592377e3539e6cfc7 en: Tidy website grammar diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/chroot-env.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/chroot-env.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/chroot-env.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ /# tazpkg get-install slitaz-toolchain

-Once the environment is configured, you can compile applications from source to create packages, test scripts etc. +Once the environment is configured, you can compile applications from source to create packages, test scripts, etc. The Cookbook should help you out here:

Exit the environment

diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@

Edit files

-Editing text files, scripts, configuration files etc, can be done easily using +Editing text files, scripts, configuration files, etc, can be done easily using the text editor GNU Nano in a console or graphical terminal. Example with a file bookmarks.html (<Ctrl+X> to quit and save): diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@

To begin, first we must define where we are going to work by creating a directory and several sub directories to accomodate all the different files. The hacking of the ISO can be done from within a SliTaz system or any -other GNU/Linux distribution such as Debian, Fedora, PCLinuxOS etc. If you use SliTaz LiveCD mode +other GNU/Linux distribution such as Debian, Fedora, PCLinuxOS, etc. If you use SliTaz LiveCD mode (where you can remove the CD once SliTaz has launched in RAM and burn your new ISO), It's advisable to use USB media to carry on working, otherwise your work will be lost on shutdown. To begin you need to create a hacking directory that you can use inside /home/slitaz within the diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@

SliTaz LiveCD mode provides sound support, but no video player, however you can watch YouTube by installing the get-flash-plugin package. To watch videos you can use Xine, it supports most formats such -as avi, mov, mpeg etc, note Xine can also act as an audio player. At the sound level, you have a mixer +as avi, mov, mpeg, etc. Note Xine can also act as an audio player. At the sound level, you have a mixer (alsamixer) and audio player (alsaplayer), both installed by default on the standard LiveCD. SliTaz also provides tools to configure your sound card.

diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/network-config.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -163,7 +163,7 @@
  • Enter your username, please note that this is the username with which you communicate with your ISP.
  • Internet interface, default is eth0 unless you have more than one, - in which case you will have eth1, eth2 etc. Usually the Enter key is + in which case you will have eth1, eth2, etc. Usually the Enter key is sufficient.
  • If you have a permanent ASDL link answer yes, otherwise answer no (default).
    • diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/network.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/network.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@

    The configuration files are stored in ~/.links, though it's not advisable to modify them. However, Links provides a configuration interface via the toolbar at the top, where you can configure the languages, -bookmarks etc. When you change options, you must save them via the menu +bookmarks, etc. When you change options, you must save them via the menu bar --> Configuration --> Save options.

    diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -243,7 +243,7 @@

    Add commands to be executed at boot

    During the boot process, various scripts are executed to configure services, such as the start of the -web server, networking etc. On SliTaz there is a script /etc/init.d/local.sh which allows +web server, networking, etc. On SliTaz there is a script /etc/init.d/local.sh which allows you to add commands to be launched at system startup. You can also create new scripts in /etc/init.d, their links in /etc/rc.scripts for shell scripts and use /etc/rc.d for links to the startup script daemon in /etc/rcS.conf: diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/handbook/web-server.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@

    This chapter describes the configuration and use of the LightTPD web server. It's a fast, secure, flexible HTTP server, using a small memory footprint. It enables intelligent management of the cpu load and offers -FastCGI support, CGI, Auth, Output compression and the rewriting of URLs etc. LightTPD is a cheap way to host your +FastCGI support, CGI, Auth, Output compression and the rewriting of URLs, etc. LightTPD is a cheap way to host your own site on an old machine.

    diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html --- a/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@

    SliTaz GNU/Linux is distributed as a bootable LiveCD allowing you to graphically install to the hard drive and retain the use of your previous -system including all settings, applications, documents etc. +system including all settings, applications, documents, etc.

    The project distributes an ISO image called "core", which is the body of the diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.txt --- a/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.txt Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.txt Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ -------------- SliTaz GNU/Linux is distributed as a bootable LiveCD allowing you to graphically install to the hard drive and retain the use of your previous -system including all settings, applications, documents etc. +system including all settings, applications, documents, etc. The project distributes an ISO image called "core", which is the body of the system, providing a selection of multi-use packages for surfing the web, diff -r 1aee368acd7c -r 442ece8703dd en/mailing-list.html --- a/en/mailing-list.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/mailing-list.html Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ in the Slitaz community. The list is open to everyone, you are free to subscribe, unsubscribe at any time. It is a very effective means of collaboration, and is used to provide free technical support to users of -SliTaz. Developers, advanced users, proofreaders etc, use the same list to +SliTaz. Developers, advanced users, proofreaders, etc, use the same list to manage the development of the project. Using the same list for support and development allows us to reach a wider audience, resulting in a faster, more accurate response. However, the members on the list are all volunteers and do