# HG changeset patch # User Paul Issott # Date 1220954391 0 # Node ID 1aee368acd7c587ae6a8232592377e3539e6cfc7 # Parent 44c1d75f86307176597f200faa5188282caf64bc en: Tidy website grammar diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/devel/index.html --- a/en/devel/index.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/devel/index.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@

-SliTaz is a tiny community and listens to it's users. There are several +SliTaz is a tiny community and listens to its users. There are several developers who are active on the forum and the Mailing List.

diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html --- a/en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@

Compile and generate packages

Configure, compile, strip.., The way SliTaz generates a package can be put into a single command. -To avoid frustration, it is advisable to begin to build your package without changing it's receipt or seeking +To avoid frustration, it is advisable to begin to build your package without changing its receipt or seeking dependancies. M4 is an ideal candidate for your first cook: 

 # tazwok cook m4
diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@

The command rm has several options. To delete a directory and -it's contents, we use the -rf option. +its contents, we use the -rf option. Example: 

diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/graphics.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
 The GIMP (GNU Image Manipulation) is software that can manipulate images to a very high quality level.
 It allows you to do what you would expect from an application that processes images, ie layers, filters, 
 support scripts adding functionality, etc. GIMP supports a large number of image formats such as:
-PNG, JPEG, XPM, PPM, TIFF, PostScript, PSD, it also offers it's own XCF format. To install GIMP:
+PNG, JPEG, XPM, PPM, TIFF, PostScript, PSD, it also offers its own XCF format. To install GIMP:
 

 
 # tazpkg get-install gimp
 

diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/livecd.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
 
 
Sessions - Login, passwords and X

 

-When the system has finished it's initialization, the screen is cleared and the
+When the system has finished its initialization, the screen is cleared and the
 login prompt or the session manager Slim is displayed. Now you can choose to login
 as hacker (without password) or as root administrator (password root).
 Once logged into a session, you can use the many commands available in Busybox, 
diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/network-config.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@
 /etc/firewall.conf.
 

 

-The default firewall script begins with it's own set options for the 
+The default firewall script begins with its own set options for the 
 Kernel ie. ICMP redirects, source routing, logs for unresolved addresses and 
 spoof filters. The script then launches the rules defined in the 
 iptables_rules() function of the configuration file:
diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/office.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/office.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/office.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 possibility of opening them directly in a web browser via a URL or a mail client using an email address.
 Osmo also offers a calendar, a date calculator and the ability to take notes classified by day. If
 you use USB media associated with the LiveCD, it will even retain your data for you. On an installed
-system, you can syncronize data with USB media by using Grsync. Osmo keeps it's data in the 
+system, you can syncronize data with USB media by using Grsync. Osmo keeps its data in the 
 hidden folder ~/.osmo.
 

 
diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 

 Control and administer remotely with the Dropbear SSH secure server. Dropbear is a small SSH client/server
 supporting SSH 2. It's compatible with OpenSSH and uses ~/.ssh/authorized_keys for the management of public keys.
-Dropbear also provides it's own version of scp, allowing you to copy files
+Dropbear also provides its own version of scp, allowing you to copy files
 between machines in a secure manner.
 

 

diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
 

 We will create a file with root priviledges and test the daemon 'crond' with a task performed every minute -
 writing the date to a file /tmp/crond.test. It should be noted that the utility has an option
-crontab for editing cron file using 'vi', this is not provided by SliTaz. In it's place you can use
+crontab for editing cron file using 'vi', this is not provided by SliTaz. In its place you can use
 GNU nano (<Ctrl+X> to save & exit):
 

 
 # nano /var/spool/cron/crontabs/root
diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/doc/handbook/web-server.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
 Now you can configure the modules by specifying the debug level and method (plain) and the
 path to the file containing a list of names using a protected password to access the directories. You must also 
 define the directories that require authorization. In this example we'll protect the admin/ directory
-and authorize it's access to user hacker (user=hacker):
+and authorize its access to user hacker (user=hacker):
 

 
# Authentication for protected directory.
 auth.debug = 2
diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/index.html
--- a/en/index.html	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/index.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
 	
  • 18 May 2008 - Cooking 20080518 and LinuxDays.ch
    
 	SliTaz team is proud to announce the availability of a new Cooking
 	LiveCD ISO image providing huge changes from the stable release.
-	SliTaz now uses Openbox as it's default Window Manager, desktop icons let
+	SliTaz now uses Openbox as its default Window Manager, desktop icons let
 	you launch your favorite applications and manage files and dbus and hal
 	will automatically mount removable media such as USB keys or Hard disks.
 	Packages can now be managed through the graphical Packages Manager
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
 	English forum
 	providing help and support to users speaking English. Since the project
 	is French based, we get a lot of feedback and requests from the English
-	speaking community that we want to honour. The forum has it's own domain
+	speaking community that we want to honour. The forum has its own domain
 	forum.slitaz.org. The default
 	interface is in French but settings can be changed when you login with your
     account. The crew is also working on the lack of English documentation.
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@
     in March 2008, matching one year of the first SliTaz public release. This will
     also give us time to bring you a rock solid stable version with all these new
     features and more than 240 packages on the mirror. So, this new SliTaz
-    release brings you Alsa with it's mixer, Alsaplayer, mpg123, Gcolor2,
+    release brings you Alsa with its mixer, Alsaplayer, mpg123, Gcolor2,
     pcmciautils, and a new Kernel. SliTaz also provides new options to use at
     boot time and isapnptools for very old hardware like IBM GL300 6272/6282 or
     P133/32M. All this new stuff fits in an ISO image of 22,4 Mb. The Simple
diff -r 44c1d75f8630 -r 1aee368acd7c en/rss.xml
--- a/en/rss.xml	Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/rss.xml	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 		
 	SliTaz team is proud to announce the availability of a new Cooking
 	LiveCD ISO image providing huge changes from the stable release.
-	SliTaz now uses Openbox as it's default Window Manager, desktop icons let
+	SliTaz now uses Openbox as its default Window Manager, desktop icons let
 	you launch your favorite applications and manage files and dbus and hal
 	will automatically mount removable media such as USB keys or Hard disks.
 	Packages can now be managed through the graphical Packages Manager