# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1221069138 0
# Node ID 0b70fb72663e963d899597011bd21694a69d5415
# Parent  0d9a6846b211029579559f99871954a7a6301b64
en: General Tidyup

diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/devel/index.html
--- a/en/devel/index.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/devel/index.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
 Note that the current packages are not immutable, if you find an alternative 
 that is lighter, with more features or more <em>sexy</em> for a few extra KB, 
 you can suggest it on the Mailing List. Particular attention is given to 
-packages for the LiveCD; these should be stripped, removing unnecesary 
+packages for the LiveCD, these should be stripped, removing unnecesary 
 dependancies and compiler options. In general candidate packages for the core 
 LiveCD are discussed on the Mailing List.
 </p>
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/cookbook/rootcd.html
--- a/en/doc/cookbook/rootcd.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/cookbook/rootcd.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 <h3>Syslinux/isolinux</h3>
 <p>
 Syslinux and main bootloader of SliTaz - we use the isolinux version to start 
-the system contained on the CD-ROM. Simple effective and configurable, it
+the system contained on the CD-ROM. Simple effective and configurable, isolinux
 was installed during the creation of the base system.
 The binary is named isolinux.bin and its configuration file isolinux.cfg.
 Here's an example of isolinux.cfg using isolinux.msg to post the splash
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 directly use by copying to the root of the CD-ROM. SliTaz 
 provides a logo (rootcd/boot/isolinux/splash.lss) which you can locate in 
 <a href="slitaz-tools.html">SliTaz tools</a>.
-To display a splash image when booting; it's necessary that the 'display' option calls 
+To display a splash image when booting, it's necessary that the 'display' option calls 
 the isolinux.msg file which loads the *.lss format image. Note that the isolinux.msg file 
 uses 24 ASCII characters. Example using 'echo' and an isolinux.msg file incorporating a .lss 
 splash image:
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/handbook/desktop.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/desktop.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/desktop.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 <ul>
 	<li><code>Background</code> manages the wallpaper. This tag supports the
 	<code>solid</code>, <code>gradient</code>, <code>image</code> or <code>tile</code>
-	attributes, to respectively; use a solid color, create a gradient, 
+	attributes, to respectively:- use a solid color, create a gradient, 
 	display a resized image or tile an image.</li>
 
 	<li><code>BorderStyle</code> controls the windows border.</li>
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/handbook/development.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
 Before starting a new SHell script, you must pay attention to the interpreter used. Most SHell 
 scripts use <code>/bin/sh</code>, because it's more portable, but there are scripts that rely on 
 <code>/bin/bash</code> and this must be installed on the system. For a SHell script to function, it 
-must be made executable by the current user by changing permissions on the command line 
+must be made executable by changing permissions on the command line 
 using the <code>chmod</code> tool. To create a <code>script.sh</code> and make it executable:
 </p>
 <pre>
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
 compiled from official sources, Perl scripts running Microperl are compatible with the complete version of Perl. 
 One of Perl's strengths is its portability, it can be used on any system and it's an interpreted language, 
 which means that the code doesn't need to be compiled and can be used directly. On SliTaz Perl and Microperl 
-are not installed by default on LiveCD; you can either rebuild your ISO or install through the package 
+are not installed by default on the LiveCD; you can either rebuild your ISO or install through the package 
 manager. Note: Microperl is only 1 MB and provides no modules:
 </p>
 <pre>
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
 The Python programming language is available as an installable package. Once installed, you can create your 
 own scripts/programs and use CGI applications with the LightTPD web server, taking care to 
 <a href="web-server.html#cgi-python">configure the server</a> properly. The official SliTaz Mercurial 
-repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - a combination trusted to a product that's
+repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - a solution best trusted to a product that's
 reliable and robust. To install the <code>python</code> package with tazpkg:
 </p>
 <pre>
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
 The path to the files used is specified in the configuration
 file <code>tazlito.conf</code> - by default the files are 
 located in <code>/home/slitaz/distro/addfiles</code>. The additional files
-the core flavor provides are for example the window manager
+the core flavor provides are for example, the window manager
 JWM and some wallpapers. It is easy enough to modify, add
 or delete files in the root filesystem (<code>rootfs</code>) or the root
 of the CD (<code>rootcd</code>) and regenerate the distribution. 
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/handbook/network-config.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
 <p>
 Still using the command line, simply type <code>pppoe-start</code> to start 
 the connection. A few seconds later the system tells you that it is connected.
-If it gives you a message like TIMED OUT you may have poorly configured or 
+If it gives you a message like TIMED OUT, you may have poorly configured or 
 the connection is defective. Please check the wiring and repeat the installation
 from the beginning. To start the connection:
 </p>
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -161,8 +161,8 @@
 </pre>
 <h4>Rdate</h4>
 <p>
-To syncronize the system clock with a network time server, you can as the 
-<code>root</code> administrator use the <code>rdate -s</code> command:
+To syncronize the system clock with a network time server, you can as
+<code>root</code> use the <code>rdate -s</code> command:
 </p>
 <pre>
  # rdate -s tick.greyware.com
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
 <p>
 Htop is a system process viewer that displays cpu load, memory state (RAM) and swap used. It can also 
 display the number of tasks, uptime and PIDs of active processes. Htop can be used with the keyboard in 
-console mode, the mouse with a X terminal (xterm) and provides configuration options (F2). Htop can also 
+console mode, the mouse with a X terminal (xterm), and provides configuration options (F2). Htop can also 
 kill processes and you can select items with the up/down arrows or a mouse click. Note htop also functions 
 via SSH and can be used to monitor a remote server:
 </p>
diff -r 0d9a6846b211 -r 0b70fb72663e en/doc/handbook/x-window.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/x-window.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/x-window.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 <p>To configure the Xorg server you have two options: <code>Xorg -configure</code> 
 or the script <code>xorgconfig</code>. It is recommended that you start by using Xorg with 
 the <code>-configure</code> option. The automatic configuration of Xorg must be done in console
-mode without an X-server running; this is achieved by closing all applications and windows and hitting
+mode without an X-server running, this is achieved by closing all applications and windows and hitting
 the <code>alt-ctrl-del</code> buttons. You should now be in console mode. Now you need to run Xorg with the
 <code>-configure</code> option and copy the newly generated file to <code>/etc/X11</code>: 
 </p>