# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1307795045 -3600
# Node ID a27c3fb7ce0521e5f3c4edc4e950a7d0904c3441
# Parent  1812006355fb49f217c26519c0317a5a76214d77
Edit en docs

diff -r 1812006355fb -r a27c3fb7ce05 doc/tazpanel.en.html
--- a/doc/tazpanel.en.html	Fri Jun 10 23:02:36 2011 +0200
+++ b/doc/tazpanel.en.html	Sat Jun 11 13:24:05 2011 +0100
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 <p>
 	TazPanel is the SliTaz administration and settings center from where
-	you can control your entire system such as package management, adding 
+	you can control your entire system such as managing packages, adding 
 	or removing users, creating Live systems and much more. Navigation
 	is done with the toolbar at the top of the application window and
 	in some cases with a submenu or a side bar like in the packages interface.
@@ -21,21 +21,21 @@
 
 <p>
 	TazPanel is run as a web server on port 82 by default and can be used only
-	from the local system. If you wich to control you system from a remote host
+	from the local system. If you wish to control you system from a remote host
 	you can change the server configuartion file to allow connections from a
-	loacal network or the full world wide web, but in this last case make sure
-	to set a strong password to the panel. The server configuration file is:
-	/etc/slitaz/httpd.conf
+	local network or the entire world wide web, but in this last case make sure
+	to set a strong password for the panel. The server configuration file is
+	/etc/slitaz/httpd.conf.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Terminal</h3>
 <p>
-	TazPanel provide a small terminal emulator wich let you execute command as
+	TazPanel provides a small terminal emulator which lets you execute commands as
 	root on the remote or local system. Not all available commands are usable
-	and you should use a SSH connection for most task. That said, having access
-	to a few command within the web interface can be usfull and wget is
-	supported to allow file upload on a remote machine. The download directory
-	is /var/www/downloads by default. All commands you can use options such as
+	and you should use a SSH connection for most tasks. That said, having access
+	to a few commands within the web interface can be useful and wget is
+	supported to allow file uploads on a remote machine. The download directory
+	is /var/www/downloads by default. All commands can use options such as
 	-R -l etc.
 </p>
 
@@ -45,14 +45,14 @@
 	You can get support on the Slitaz <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">forum</a>,
 	the mailing list or the IRC channel. The official SliTaz IRC channel is on
 	Freenode, you can use LostIRC, Xchat or Pidgin on SliTaz. Freenode also
-	provide a nice IRC <a href="http://webchat.freenode.net/">web interface</a>.
+	provides a nice IRC <a href="http://webchat.freenode.net/">web interface</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Get involved</h3>
 
 <p>
 	If you want to help and get involved in SliTaz, TazPanel maybe for you!
-	We need help in translating, styling, documentation and coding. If
+	We need help in translating, styling, documenting and coding. If
 	you need more information or want to publish a new graphical style,
 	you can go to the SliTaz <a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/">Community</a>
 	and post on the Devel forum or post an update with a PM to a SliTaz
@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@
 <p>
 	TazPanel is a young application which will be improved and polished in
 	time. If you find a bug, please post on the SliTaz tracker:
-	<a href="http://bugs.slitaz.org/">bugs.slitaz.org</a>. Tazpanel have a
-	debug mode that can be enabled in the configuration file tazpanel.conf
-	and provide a <a href="/index.cgi?debug">debug page</a>.
+	<a href="http://bugs.slitaz.org/">bugs.slitaz.org</a>. Tazpanel has a
+	debug mode that can be enabled in the configuration file tazpanel.conf 
+	and also provides a <a href="/index.cgi?debug">debug page</a>.
 </p>
 
 </div>