# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1269632729 0
# Node ID ca84d0c664e1b6334045771fb2c1ee055f624ed3
# Parent  21a1f99ce80e9a5a62e34e4df4c421c99041d3b7
tiny edits

diff -r 21a1f99ce80e -r ca84d0c664e1 doc/tazlito.en.html
--- a/doc/tazlito.en.html	Fri Mar 26 17:33:07 2010 +0100
+++ b/doc/tazlito.en.html	Fri Mar 26 19:45:29 2010 +0000
@@ -340,8 +340,8 @@
 <a name="build-loram"></a>
 <h3><font color="#6c0023">build-loram</font></h3>
 <p>
-Creates a ISO image flavor for low ram system from a SliTaz ISO image.
-You can build a flavor with / always in ram or where / may stay on cdrom.
+Creates an ISO image flavor for low ram systems from a SliTaz ISO image.
+You can build a flavor with / always in ram or where / resides on the cdrom:
 </p>
 <pre>
  # tazlito build-loram slitaz.iso loram.iso
diff -r 21a1f99ce80e -r ca84d0c664e1 tazlito
--- a/tazlito	Fri Mar 26 17:33:07 2010 +0100
+++ b/tazlito	Fri Mar 26 19:45:29 2010 +0000
@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@
 		done
 		cd - > /dev/null
 		echo "Default urls for /iso/$(cat $TMP_DIR/initfs/etc/slitaz-release)/flavors/slitaz-loram-cdrom.iso: $urliso"
-		echo -n "list of urls to insert: "
+		echo -n "List of urls to insert: "
 		read -t 30 urliso2
 		urliso="$urliso2 $urliso"
 	fi
@@ -884,7 +884,7 @@
 }
 
 # Move meta boot configuration files to basic configuration files
-# because meta loram flavor is useless when rootfs is not load in ram
+# because meta loram flavor is useless when rootfs is not loaded in ram
 unmeta_boot()
 {
 	if [ -f $TMP_DIR/loramiso/boot/isolinux/noram.cfg ]; then
@@ -898,8 +898,8 @@
 	fi
 }
 
-# Move rootfs to squashfs filesystem(s) in the cdrom writeable with aufs.
-# These squashfs may be load in ram a boot time.
+# Move rootfs to squashfs filesystem(s) to the cdrom writeable with aufs.
+# These squashfs may be loaded in ram a boot time.
 # Rootfs are also copied to cdrom for tiny ramsize systems.
 # Meta flavors are converted to normal flavors.
 build_loram_cdrom()
@@ -921,7 +921,7 @@
 	create_iso $OUTPUT $TMP_DIR/loramiso
 }
 
-# Create http bootstrap to load a remove loram_cdrom
+# Create http bootstrap to load and remove loram_cdrom
 # Meta flavors are converted to normal flavors.
 build_loram_http()
 {
diff -r 21a1f99ce80e -r ca84d0c664e1 tazlitobox
--- a/tazlitobox	Fri Mar 26 17:33:07 2010 +0100
+++ b/tazlitobox	Fri Mar 26 19:45:29 2010 +0000
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@
 				</hbox>
 				<hbox>
 					<text use-markup="true">
-						<label>"<b>RAM need:</b>  "</label>
+						<label>"<b>RAM needed:</b>  "</label>
 					</text>
 					<entry>
 						<default>128M</default>
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@
 	<text wrap="true" width-chars="25" use-markup="true">
 		<label>
 "
-Build a low RAM version
+Build a Low RAM version
 of a SliTaz ISO image.
 The root filesystem is
 compressed and slower.
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@
 			<variable>LORAM_RAM</variable>
 		</radiobutton>
 		<radiobutton>
-			<label>The filesystem may be on CDROM.</label>
+			<label>The filesystem may be on a CDROM.</label>
 			<variable>LORAM_CDROM</variable>
 		</radiobutton>
 		<radiobutton>
@@ -552,7 +552,7 @@
 		</hbox>
 		<hbox>
 			<text use-markup="true">
-				<label>"<b>ISO ouput:</b>"</label>
+				<label>"<b>ISO output:</b>"</label>
 			</text>
 			<entry accept="filename">
 				<default>loram.iso</default>